Across the Universe

A pretty good drawing. A few critiques I have for it, however, is firstly the shading. It looks as it the shading was done in one layer or in a very rushed manner. If you were to slow down and hide the pencil strokes better, I think it would have a more finished result. Also, the hair. It's better to think of hair as a shape or object, rather than lines. You're off to a good start.